There lived two Asses named Jena and Jippy. Their owner was
a very nice man who worked very hard to help his family sustain. Jena is like
her owner- hardworking. On the other hand, Jippy likes to try to find a way out
of work. One day, the owner took Jippy to his work to bring back salt to the
village to sell it to the villagers. When Jippy got back home, he complained to
Jena how heavy the salt bags were. Jippy also complained about how heartless
their owner is and he wants to teach his owner a lesson. Jena warned him to not
do anything stupid and reminded him how generous their owner is and how well he
takes care of both of them. Jippy ignored Jena's words. The next day when Jippy
was crossing the lake with salt bags, he slipped and fell in to water. His
owner pulled him out of the river with great difficulty and examined for wounds
or cuts. The owner only found very minor scratches on Jippy. They proceeded to
cross the river. Jippy noticed that the weight on this back have lessened by
more than half.
Most of the salt is dissolved from the bags |
When they got home Jippy overheard the owner talking about how
less salt there is remaining and they won’t be able to make a profit out of
selling the salt he brought home. Jippy approached Jena with joy and told her “look Jena, I have a plan. I fell down
when we were crossing the river and the salt I was carrying dissolved in to the
river and I only had to carry half as much as weight.”
Jena responded by saying,
“oh ohhhh, I see where this is going”
Jippy- “Oh yes! I am going to fall again tomorrow. This way I
will also teach our owner a lesson. If he can’t sell all the salt, he won’t
make any profits from his business”
Jena- “Your plan is only going to invite danger, it is
better to do your work properly”
Jippy turned his head back to Jena and planned to proceed
with this plan.
The next day Jippy fell in to the river and carried half as
much salt back home. Without the profit from the salt business the owner didn’t
have enough money to buy enough food to feed both Jena and Jippy. Since Jena is
hard working and is more useful to the owner, he fed her and not Jippy. Jippy was
so aggravated that he decide d to stay in water till all the salt melted away.
The next day, Jippy fell in to the river again, this time
when he got up; he felt that his bags got heavier. Jippy didn’t realize that
the owner started sponge business and the bags he was carrying was filled with sponges.
He reached home starving and tired from carrying the extra weight.
Ass caring a heavy load |
Jippy realized his mistake and decided to follow his owner’s
order and work hard from then on.
Author's note: The story above is based on the fable "The Ass and The
Load of Salt" taken from Aseop for Children by Anonymous, Illustrated by
Milo Winter (1919). "The Ass and The Load" of Salt fable made me
think about how we all try to put in less amount of effort and expect great
results. Usually, when we don’t work hard enough and do our job properly, we
end up with twice the work load. In this story, the Ass didn’t realize how
blessed he was to have a caring owner who takes care of him, Instead of being
thankful, the ass was always complaining and being ungrateful. I wrote this
story to show everyone what will occur when we are not grateful for what we
have and when we try to avoid work and go around it. The main twist in my story
from the original story is that I added one more Ass named Jena, who is like
her owner- hardworking. I chose two images to illustrate the story. Image one
shows an ass with not heavy load and the second image show an ass with a heavy
load. The first image was used to show how the salt dissolved and the ass only
had to carry less load and second image is to show the extra amount of weight
he had to carry due to his own actions.
Good job on this story. I liked that you added a second ass to the story. The conversation between Jena and Jippy makes the story relatable. I also like the images you found. They seem to capture the situation well. The moral of the story is very true. It reminds me of doing the dishes. Whenever I am lazy and leave my dishes on the counter, they stack up and make a mess that is harder to clean later. If I just wash my dishes when I use them, it makes life much easier and cleaner.
ReplyDeleteI loved the illustrations you chose for this story, I thought they were so cute and represented the story so well. I also liked that you mixed the story up a bit and made it your own, and kept us all entertained. I thought the moral of this story is very true, I know I am guilty of sometimes wanting to work less and expect more.
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