Gautham was well known gandharva among the gods and humans.
He was humble and his talent for singing was extraordinary. When Gautham starts
singing, both earth and heaven sinks in to his beautiful voice. Gautham has come
of age and his parents were trying to find a suitable apsara for him. He received
many proposals from suitable apsaras. Someone of them were even beautiful as
the lotus and had a voice of nightingale. However, he did not find anyone
suitable for him, he felt like all of them was missing something.
By the days go by, his parents started getting impatient
with him. Finally his father decided to speak with him about their concern.
Gautham’s father – Son, many suitors came and showed
interest in you, you rejected everyone! Don’t you realize that you are getting
older and older, your mother and I would like to see you get married before we
close our eyes.
Gautham- Father, I understand your concerns. However, I hope
you do understand that I cannot make anyone my life partner without feeling a
connection towards them. I have always been obedient towards you and mother and
followed every word you have spoken to me. Please give me some more time to
make a decision.
Gautham’s father- Of course son, but do consider your
parents too. We are getting older and we do not have much time on heaven.
Gautham – yes father.
Gautham walked away feeling pressured to make a decision
about his life partner. He decided to go for a walk in the forest to clear his
mind and hoping that he will be able to narrow down his options of the
proposals.
Gautham was deep in his thoughts when he accidently bumped
in to a maiden. They both apologized to each other and walked away. Gautham
started walking through the forest. He could not think about anything else
except how beautiful the maiden’s eyes were. There is nothing special about
her, however the way she looked at him drew him towards her. The next day
Gautham waited in the same path hoping that she would pass by. For Gautham’s
luck she passed through the same path. He stopped her and introduced himself
and she introduced herself. Her name was Meena, she lives in the nearby village
and comes to the forest every day to feed her cattle. Gautham started becoming an everyday visitor
and gave Meena company while the cattle went on to enjoy the tender grass in
the forest. Slowly they fell in love. Finally, Gautham decided to inform his
parents about his love.
Gautham – Father, Mother, I found someone and would like to
get married to her with your blessings.
Gautham’s father- We are so pleased to hear than son. Whom did
you pick from the proposals?
Gautham – Her name is Meena and she is a human who lives in
the village next to the forest.
Both his parents were furious to hear this
With ranging anger his mother spoke, “We wanted you to get
married to an apsara, not a mere human girl. She is an ordinary girl, not even
a princess. We will not give you our blessings if you proceed with this”.
After many arguments and reasoning, his parents finally
decided to meet Meena. When they met her they were impressed by her intelligence.
They were pleased to see that meena was well mannered and humble. They agreed
to give blessings for their marriage.
Author’s note
While I was reading the reading Diary, I came across vocabs
gandharvas and apsaras. I had to click in the link provided and it took me to
the Wikipedia page and I was fascinated by them. So I had to write a story
about Gandharva. Since I am a big junkie for love stories, I had to turn this
in to a love story.
Bibliography
Gandharvas, Wikipedia
Click here to access the wiki page about gandharva
Duryodhana and the Gantharvas, PDE Mahabharatha
Click here to access story telling which mentions gandharva
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Anu!
ReplyDeleteReally good job on your story this week. I have always wondered what would happen if we allowed our parents to decide whom we should marry. Would they pick someone who the think is suitable? Or would they pick someone whom they think is compatible with us? I don't know what I would do if I were to let my parents chose who I would marry.
Hi Anu! This was such a happy story! It's nice to see an ending where everything gets resolved so peacefully and everyone is so happy. The apsaras and gandharvas are really interesting characters so it's really cool that you decided to write about them. One little change I would make is that it's a bit hard to read when you don't have any spacing between lines of dialogue or different paragraphs. I think if you went back and added some space between the speaking characters, it would help to make them better distinguished.
ReplyDeleteHey Anu! I'm really glad you decided to write about the gandharvas and apsaras, I haven't seen any other stories on things such as these and it's always interesting to find out something new. I liked reading your story and I generally like the way you designed the paragraphs, however I agree that there should be some spaces between the paragraphs so it's not just a wall of text! Thanks for the read!
ReplyDeleteHey Anu's. Your story reminded me of a disney movie compressed into one page. It not often in stories when the Men are looking for suitors. Combine this Guathulm had a very upstanding character and you can get a pretty "cute" story. I felt the ended was sort of rushed because they parents just instantly gave in. Other than than that, it was a great story!
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